Sunday, January 24, 2010

Sojourn Of life

Life isn't just full of happiness,
It's sunsets, it's love, it's tears.
It's the thoughts of yesterdays memories,
That can wash away all our fears.

It's that very painful experience,
That each one of us has had.
It's the laughter that fills the air,
It's the tears when you are sad.

It's loving that someone special,
That at one time made you smile.
It's the pain of losing that person,
But the memories that make it worthwhile.

It's that child in every one of us,
Although in time we'll all be old.
It's the good times we'll never forget,
It's the memories we'll always hold.

It's the hug that we all need,
When we'd rather drown in our sorrow.
It's the hope in every one of us,
That makes us hold on for tomorrow
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18 comments:

  1. Dear,
    since eternity,life has been a favorite topic for poets and philosophers.you have brought out the contrasts very well.A monotonous life is not worth enjoying...

    Overall, a nice effort.waiting to read more of you..

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  2. Dear
    ur poem reflects the essence of life . one shd make the life colorfull and enjoy it.
    nicely penned!!!!!!!!
    hoping to read more from u

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  3. nicely written!!!
    makes one to sit still for 1 sec n think the way u intend them to think..
    nice piece of wrk!!
    god bls u...

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  4. What an excellent poetic marvel! This is one of the most expressive poems in have ever read and perhaps can never read in future.

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  5. very nicely writen..very close to reality
    keep it up

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  6. nice work man!!!!
    really a nice poem!!!

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  7. great work chhote....
    didn't know you had so much talent.....
    keep up the good work

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  8. awesome!!!!!
    rhyming nhi h....pr mast h
    pta nhi tha tu itna sochta h
    nice work
    continue............

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  10. what shouid i say dude....
    frankly speaking m still searching for a word 2 say abt dis...
    in one line i can say dat "u rock dude!!!"
    continue writing like dis n cruise forward in life...
    dont forward to carry ur backpack...
    keep d memories safe...:)

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  11. This poem in a quite mature and bold fashion covers the entity called life.
    This post reminds me my school days of Frost and Shelly.Would surely look after your next literary pieces..

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  12. Nice yar...i din kno u write poems or something..neways u wrote it very well dude..n i m lookin forward for ur poems in insti magazine..do mail me..al d best!!!

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  13. good job dude...learning from your thoughts...u had analysed life very deeply...keep it up!!

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  14. Good job bro...A very nice effort indeed...
    This is yr finest creation i mst say...Very nice and touching indeed.Waiting to read more and more...

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  15. very well thought & inked!!!!!
    there's a great poet emerging in you.....
    go ahead......waiting to read more & more.....

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  16. very well thought & inked!!!!!
    there's a great poet emerging in you.....
    go ahead......waiting to read more & more.....

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  17. FABULOUS is d word to depict ma views fr this superlative writing!!!!!!

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