Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Till Your Dreams Come True

Often your tasks will be many,
And more than you think you can do.
Often the road will be rugged
And the hills insurmountable, too.
But always remember,
The hills ahead
Are never as steep as they seem,
And with Faith in your heart
Start upward
And climb 'til you reach your dream.
For nothing in life that is worthy
Is ever too hard to achieve
If you have the courage to try it,
And you have the faith to believe.
For faith is a force that is greater
Than knowledge or power or skill,
And many defeats turn to triumph
If you trust in God's wisdom and will.
For faith is a mover of mountains,
There's nothing that God cannot do,
So, start out today with faith in your heart,
And climb 'til your dream comes true!

13 comments:

  1. ab mujhe jeena kaise hai wo bhi aap hi batayenge ....?yaar kuch humorous likho...

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  2. @james
    good point sir ji .........i have got ur point.but still it was a general felling which i tried to pen.

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  3. woh...............kya likha hai.........

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  4. good wrk yaar
    message is definitely loud and clear
    but yaar tu to mujhe ab surprise kr rha h
    ab tak kahaan tha yeh talent

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  5. nice yar..its definately motivating.
    bt i will suggest u 1 thing,put it in more arranged way(grp of 4 lines lik in ur prev poem) so dat it will rym properly.

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  6. really nice work buddy.....waiting for more from you.....

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  7. "And many defeats turn to triumph
    If you trust in God's wisdom and will."
    These are the best lines dear...U simply rock keep writin...

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  9. i just wanna say , its an excellent piece of work. i mean it kept us spellbound while reading it. you hav an excellent command over language, just the thing is try to incorporate some human emotions(ur choice, do accept it pr not), which will move the reader.
    god bls u......

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  10. @ Niyati
    that certainly was a good piece of advice. i will do my best to keep that in mind for my next work

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  11. There is nothing called Dream boss !!! Its just pre step to reality...and instant observation. Well from an Non-inertial frame i can see you are perfectly matching your momentum even in the Frictioned Edge.You pulse of thoughts have more resonance frequency than any one of your age!!Keep swinging in a perfect harmonic in your life my dear...

    Hiranmay Mahanta

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  12. watch it man .....
    strike the iron when hot... dreaming is gud bt day dreaming is a crime.make sure none gets embabaressed bcoz of nt able 2 accomplish wt he dreamt 4 d whole of his life....

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